You are my joy
You are my sorrow
You are my strength
You are my weakness
You are my smile
You are my tears
You are my thoughts
You are my calmness
You are my success
You are my failure
You are my nectar
You are my poison
You are my breeze
You are my storm
You are my love
You are my loss.
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The train of opposites can be related to anything or anybody dear to us. That's the beauty of this poem.
There comes in the last two lines very aptly - love & loss. The irony is, love and loss constitute/summarize all the lines mentioned before.
Well done.
Thanks Padmaja! You have very well understood what i tried to bring out through this poem.
Thanks again.
Wow the poem is too good. simple train of opposites but how apt when equated to the object of love.
Thanks Kowsalya for your comments.
It is very good poem Latha. Actually the meanings for two different words in your poem are not opposite, they are the same because it is Love!
Thank you Latha.
Thanks Mr. Radhakrishnan for rightly understanding the meaning of my poem.
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